Model Essay for IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic: Learning a Language Could Be Advantageous

IELTS Writing Task 2 Question

Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample Answer

Language translation software programs have gained popularity (become popular) in recent times due to developments in the science and technology sector. Due to this development, web-based language translation applications have grown dramatically (=significantly, rapidly) in the past few years. But learning a language from a teacher in person (by meeting with someone) is still more beneficial (=advantageous). I agree with the statement that there are more manifold (many; of several different types) benefits in learning a language in this fast-paced (happening very quickly) world.

Language translation apps are becoming increasingly famous nowadays because they are free and easily accessible. But there are a variety of reasons why learning a language is essential (=necessary). People who speak more than one language have improved problem-solving and critical thinking (the process of thinking carefully without allowing opinions or feelings to affect you) skills and acquire the ability to multitask. Also, there are still certain parts of the world where internet facilities are not available. Software for translation is not available in such places. Therefore, learning a new language becomes necessary in these scenarios.

Secondly, the translations provided by these web-based translators are word to word translations. It merely gives the meaning of the word and fails to provide the true essence of the sentence. Translations apps are built in such a way that they cannot understand the slang and idioms used by people in everyday life. In contrast, an instructor can help you understand the true significance of a sentence. Sometimes there are multiple meanings to one word, and translation apps fail to convey its exact meaning. As a result, it can cause a lot of confusion and misunderstanding.

To sum up, translation tools are not reliable. It fails to provide the sentences’ accurate meaning, and one should not rely on language translation apps just because they are readily available.

 

Structure of the opinion essay

• Choose the side (agree or disagree):

Do you agree that even though there are a lot of language translation softwares available, learning a language still could be advantageous?

(or)

Do you disagree that even though there are a lot of language translation softwares available, learning a language still could be advantageous?

After choosing the side, you can plan your essay and start to write the introduction:

INTRODUCTION

Question Paraphrased – Language translation software programs have gained popularity in recent times due to developments in the science and technology sector. However, there are many translation apps available on mobile phones and laptops. But learning a language from an instructor can be far beneficial.

Opinion – I agree with the statement that there are manifold benefits in learning a language.

A thesis statement – In the subsequent paragraphs, I shall explain why learning a language through a human instructor is beneficial.

BODY PARAGRAPH 1

Topic: Why web-based translators are unreliable

Supporting points:

• Knowledge acquisition is necessary
• Internet unavailable in certain parts of the world

BODY PARAGRAPH 2

Topic: Why learning a language is necessary

Supporting points:

• Translator apps are unreliable
• Fails to provide true meaning of the sentences
• Human instructors are reliable

CONCLUSION

Reiterated that translation software applications are unreliable and acquiring new language skills is necessary.