IELTS Direct Question Essay Model Answer – Topic: Computers

IELTS Writing Task 2 Question

The computer is widely used in modern society. What are the disadvantages if one cannot use a computer? What should the government do?

Sample Answer

INTRODUCTION

For many, living in a modern society implies that they are computer literate ( someone who can use computers to some extent). Let’s consider the question in terms of (in relation to) the career paths (a series of job positions held leading to your short-term and long-term professional goals) of some professions and look at what governments can do in the schools. (39 words)

BODY

First, the number of career paths in which one needs to be able to use computers daily (on a daily basis) is growing by the day. Not very long ago, it was the case in only a few specialized (working in and knowing a lot about one particular subject, etc) jobs that computers were indispensable (important, vital, crucial). Today, however, even blue-collar (workers do work needing physical skill or strength rather than office work) workers have to know their way around the keyboard at work. For instance, more and more manufacturing processes are becoming computerized (adapted so as to be operated by computer, receptionists are using word processors instead of typewriters, and filing clerks don’t work in rooms full of shelves and files anymore but consult the databases on their computers for information.

Second, I am of the opinion (to believe or think) that future governments will be forced to look at their education systems and make some adjustments (adaptation). In the past, mathematics was considered a must (something that you definitely need in a specific situation), especially in the education of boys. Children will have to be introduced to computers at an early age, and a subject like computer science will have to become just as important (crucial, vital) as math. This will mean dedicating (devoting) large amounts of money to training teachers and acquiring the necessary equipment. (179 words)

CONCLUSION

Education and some professional developments (career paths) have been discussed as examples of why one should be computer literate in the workplace today and what governments will have to do in the future. (31 words)

(Total words: 249)