IELTS Opinion Essay Model Answer 02 – Topic: Tobacco

IELTS Writing Task 2 Question

Although we are free to use tobacco, some people feel it should be made illegal like any other drug. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample Answer

INTRODUCTION

Burning tobacco leaves in some way and inhaling the smoke is a habit that millions of people all over the world (around the world) are practicing. The issue will be investigated by referring to (pointing out/mentioning) freedom, restrictions, and the position of children. (38 words)

BODY

Like freedom of religion and speech, freedom of choice is a basic human right that all adult people should be able to enjoy. There is no justification (reason) for anyone to think that they can make better choices than everybody else. What I mean is that each and every adult person should be able to decide for him- or herself if he or she is going to use addictive materials (substances) like tobacco, alcohol, or drugs.

Policy makers should rather look at the reasons why people choose to use addictive substances. Restricting the use of a substance has never been an effective deterrent (something that prevents/stops people from doing something). For instance, the prohibition (a law or rule that stops people from doing something) laws during the 1920s in the US against the use of alcohol proved to have the opposite effect for which they were designed and were for that reason subsequently abolished (removed).

That children have to be protected against ruthless (heartless) and greedy elements in our society is a principle that is generally accepted in all civilized (developed) communities. For example, the principles on which the laws concerning the sale of tobacco to children are based should differ considerably from those applied (pertaining) to adults. (185 words)

I have discussed the issue in terms of freedom of choice, restricting laws, and the special situation of children. It should be clear, in conclusion, that this is a complex issue with many unanswered (unresolved) questions. (35 words)

(Total words: 258)

Vocabulary for IELTS Writing Task 2

deterrent (noun) something that prevents/stops people from doing something

prohibition (noun) a law or rule that stops people from doing something

ruthless (adj) heartless; willing to make other people suffer so that you can achieve your aims

civilized (adj) a civilized society, country etc has developed an advanced culture and institutions